DISSERTATION
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Project 1 - Dissertation draft
Week 2
Ms Hayati told us to review our old literature and reflect on it to think of a prototype for our final year project.
Feedback: Ms Hayati gave me a thorough explanation about writing the dissertation
Week 3
I made my dissertation skeleton and started on the introduction to my dissertation.
Feedback: For my literature review, I needed to compare and contrast all of the literature I had read instead of only comparing 2 literatures. I’ll also have to go through some notes to ensure my content has substantial meaning.
Week 4
I started on my methodology because I didn't have the mood to write a literature review yet so I gathered my old data and looked at it again to write the methodology part of the dissertation.
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I was told to be careful about margins for my grid system
Week 10
[holiday]
Week 11
Progress on fixing the layout
Feedback:
I had to try and fix my resolution for my dissertation cover
Week 12
Tried fixing the cover resolution, it still didn’t work
Feedback:
Feedback:
Best journal to choose was SAGE’s Games and Culture journal so if I could find a sample, it would help me be able to pick that journal
Week 14
Spoke to Ms Hayati about the journal I chose being SAGE: Games and Culture journal
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ePwPlFB1F4CxYJQFm_ZRLSaIcKXAeW7qz6h0xSxex5Y/edit?usp=sharing
Feedback:
Ms Hayati told me about how I had to make my article look exactly like the sample I found and to cross ref the other samples given to make sure I’m doing the right thing
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1lZ3zn5ewdBMEqoOtqXwcgneYmD8qAu5u
Project 1 - Dissertation draft
Week 2
Ms Hayati told us to review our old literature and reflect on it to think of a prototype for our final year project.
Feedback: Ms Hayati gave me a thorough explanation about writing the dissertation
Week 3
I made my dissertation skeleton and started on the introduction to my dissertation.
Feedback: For my literature review, I needed to compare and contrast all of the literature I had read instead of only comparing 2 literatures. I’ll also have to go through some notes to ensure my content has substantial meaning.
Week 4
I started on my methodology because I didn't have the mood to write a literature review yet so I gathered my old data and looked at it again to write the methodology part of the dissertation.
Feedback:
- I needed a title
- Correlate every sub-topic with each other in the literature review
- Add pictures to the methodology for clarity
- My paragraphs feel lost so I’ll have to connect the flow better.
- I should take the research from my character design literature for my development for Lara Croft.
Week 5
I continued the dissertation after doing methodology with my discussion because I still remembered some material which I wanted to write in the discussion so i started writing it so I won't forget it later. I also changed my research title to be a case study on Lara Croft instead of just looking at the development of hypersexualised female characters without having more examples of other characters.
Feedback:
- Talk about the change of the title
- can add my hypothesis from the earlier semester
- make an appendix and put the research questions in there
- Qualitative and Quantitative questions can exist in the same questionnaire
Week 6
Continuation of my discussion and finishing my literature review.
Feedback:
- Check the grammar to my dissertation
- Add images to my literature review part
- Add Research Design, Research Instrumentation and Research Sampling
Week 7
Made moodboards for the cover and dissertation layout
Feedback:
It would be better to design something that would be related to our dissertation
Week 8
Made the dissertation layout
Feedback:
- The concept couldn’t be seen
- The font didn’t fit in with the dissertation very well
- I was shown some examples on layouts which were close to what I wanted to do
Week 9
I fixed up my layout
Feedback:
I was told to be careful about margins for my grid system
Week 10
[holiday]
Week 11
Progress on fixing the layout
Feedback:
I had to try and fix my resolution for my dissertation cover
Week 12
Tried fixing the cover resolution, it still didn’t work
Feedback:
- I was given my feedback to fix my design methodology sections
- rephrase a few sentences
Week 13
I discussed with Ms Hayati about the journals which I chose
Feedback:
Best journal to choose was SAGE’s Games and Culture journal so if I could find a sample, it would help me be able to pick that journal
Week 14
Spoke to Ms Hayati about the journal I chose being SAGE: Games and Culture journal
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ePwPlFB1F4CxYJQFm_ZRLSaIcKXAeW7qz6h0xSxex5Y/edit?usp=sharing
Feedback:
Ms Hayati told me about how I had to make my article look exactly like the sample I found and to cross ref the other samples given to make sure I’m doing the right thing
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